At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
*注意：题目是advantages outweigh disadvantages， 所以大家一定要记得好处和坏处都需要提及，然后再写明outweigh的问题。漏掉任何一个方面，都会导致失分。
The contemporary world has been seeing a unique demographic in some countries which have a more youthful population. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages.
· contemporary: adj. 当代的，同一时代的
· youthful: adj. 年轻的 特别要注意这个词的发音：[同时要注意的还有youth这个词，同样不要读错——】
Having a population misbalance between the old and young, with more of the latter, could encompass certain disadvantages. Old people, in general, are more experienced and have accumulated years of knowledge and exposure that they can pass along generations. With less old people in the population, there might be a drain of knowledge. For example, in countries such as India where there are more number of young adults, big companies are unable to effectively train their employees since there are not many older people to guide them and provide them with proper mentorship.
· misbalance: 不平衡；
e.g.: culture misbalance
· encompass: Vt. 包含，包括；
e.g.: The study encompasses the social, political, and economic aspects of the situation.
· accumulated: adj. 累积的，累计的
e.g.: The accumulated experience in travel can be overwhelming for anyone to trust their memory.
· be a drain of: 流失
· provide sb. with: 给Sb.提供…
· mentorship: n. 辅导教师，导师制
e.g.: We recently sponsored an event at a local university on the topic of women and mentorship.】
Despite the arguments mentioned above, I believe that young people are drivers of progress of a nation. Young people are usually considered to beaction-oriented and they take the initiative to advance in diverse fields. For example, technological development is driven by young minds who are able to tap into their innovation and build new devices such as tablets, smartphones and fitness trackers. Moreover, a larger number of youngsters enhance a country's multiculturalism. Younger people are more flexible and open to new things which makes them appreciate other people's cultures and heritages, which further impacts others' perceptions. For instance, with globalisation, young individuals in Australia have adopted more accepting attitudes towards Asian cultures that allow everyone around them to be more open-minded towards this diversity.
· young people are drivers of progress of a nation:
这句句子是一个非常不错的表达—— 大家真的可以学习一下哦—— 大意为：年轻人是名族进步的驱动者。
· action-oriented: adj. 行动导向的，以行动导向
e.g.: Action-oriented people will get things done more effectively.
· take the initiative to: 采取主动，主动进行，带头去做sth.
e.g.: If they take the initiative to get new skills, there will be a job available to them.
· tap into their innovation: 接入，接进
· multiculturalism: n. 多元文化论
e.g.: They also argue that multiculturalism is an enrichment for the society as a whole.
· accepting attitude towards: 接受的态度，开放的态度
accepting: adj. 易接受的，赞同的
· open-minded: adj. 虚心的，思想开明的 这一段中值得大家摘录学习的短语和表达真的非常多，也非常实用。希望大家都能努力的花时间摘录整理，你会看到意想不到的提升。】
In conclusion, some countries are experiencing a significant population change from the olden times with more young adults as compared to older people, which I believe is a situation with more benefits than limitations.
【一个好的结局段，也如introduction一样，句子不必多，只需要 “功能齐全”即可—— 复述文中观点，给出自己观点，完美——】